Wednesday, 3 June 2020

About me 2020

we were learning about making sure our online information is not publice when its personal.

i found it really hard to know about what to share and what to keep private because it has become so easy to share what i do no things like instagram.

next time i will take more time to craft my writing to ensure my vocabulary and sentence structures reflect my writing level.

11 comments:

  1. Hi Isaac it is Libby you did very well with your polylining buti would have added some hair at the back for your mullet.

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  2. Hi Isaac, I like your blog!

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  3. Hi its Jazmin your polyline is really good keep it up.

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  4. Kia ora Issaac. My name is Cadence and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like how you added lot and lots of detail on your uniform, but maybe next time do capital letters on your name. Just a thought a planning to be an Allblack when you grow up?

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  5. Kia ora Issaac. My name is Daniel and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I love the face detail and the hair polylining. Next time maybe add a longer neck, I’m not much of a rugby fan myself but still love it.

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  6. Kia ora Issac. My name is Kathryn and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I love how you did your avatar and how you added so much detail and in it and also your introduction for me I will add a cupple more detail but keep up all the good work and be the best wrighter you can be!

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  7. Kia ora. My name is Katana and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I love your digital picture of yourself! Maybe next time you should add a neck.Also i love the detail you added.

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